Yes, it’s back! It’s been about a year since I began writing this fanfiction and long story short, I wanted to continue it again! I believe I said I would eventually, right? Let’s set a few things straight first. This is going to be the most enhanced version of this fanfiction. I’m going to start by completely rewriting the second chapter and changing several small plot elements that didn’t quite work the first time around. There’s a Q and A thingy below if you want to read more about that.
Q and A:
Q: Why are you rewriting the story?
A: Because it’s got a really cool plot and I refuse to let it go to waste. That’s why.
Q: How often will chapters come out?
A: I won’t have a specific schedule because high school is such a booty-hole and takes up like 90% of my time. I’ll try to get them out as soon as possible though.
Q: Why do you write fanfictions instead of focusing on school?
A: Good question lol.
Q: Why are you rewriting chapter 2?
A: It was something that I rushed and made up as I was writing it. It had no structure and deserves a proper followup to the first chapter. Plus, it was cringey.
Q: When’s the rewritten n’ enhanced version of chapter 2 coming?
A: It’s being worked on right now but honestly, I feel like I need to plan it before I write it and include more obstacles for the characters this time. I’m not sure how long it’s going to take but if I had to guess, within a few weeks.
Q: Cool, so when’s chapter 3 coming?
A: It’s coming but just be patient. I have to rewrite chapter 2 first so chillax.
Q: Is the story going to be more humorous or serious this time?
A: Well it depends. I think Adam and Penelope were very self aware and it made their characters more relatable. The Mother series has a lot of subtle humor with a dark story buried under it. I’m trying to do that I guess. A deep story with splashes of humor here and there, you know?
Q: Are you going to stop being lazy and post the google doc versions of your chapters?
A: Yes actually.
Q: Why didn’t you make any changes to chapter 1?
A: There doesn’t need to be but feel free to tell me what’s wrong with it.
Q: Why did you redesign Adam and Penelope in that banner thing above this Q and A?
A: Well Adam didn’t look like a teenager in those sprites I made a long time ago. And Penelope never got a design because I forgot to even describe what she looked like in chapter twoooooo. Dang I really rushed that chapter.
I hope this clears a few things up. Without further ado, here’s chapter 1!
Short Summary: Meet Adam Lawrence, a teen who attends the single high school of Redicon and has a thing for perfect grades. He likes to impress people and make them laugh whether it’d be a potty joke or something along the lines of an improv act. His absolute favorite thing is photography. Oh, and he’s very courageous.
On what was supposed to be Adam’s day of perfection, he soon discovers that his family is missing. Adam gathers himself and his loyal friends to go on an expedition to find his lost family and more importantly, who is behind the terrible crime itself. And to just think that Adam was going to attend school that day.
Please let me know your thoughts about this post in general. It could be about chapter 1, criticisms, suggestions for chapter 2, etc. Everything is much appreciated! I’m glad to be writing this again!